tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-60861121102655483032024-03-07T22:20:34.308-08:00Li'l B's Writing JourneyThis is a blog for fiction writers by a writer to help others develop their trade or get more ideas.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.comBlogger187125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-11661786370840468392012-11-13T04:27:00.000-08:002012-11-13T05:25:43.400-08:00Power Of Myth-A Different View Of LoveChapter seven of <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0385418868/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=0385418868&linkCode=as2&tag=lilbswo-20">The Power of Myth</a> was an interesting view of love. According to Joseph Campbell, love as we know it, the joy in having a deep and usually passionate relationship with our other half, didn't exist in the early western culture. For centuries there was the harmony of arranged marriages built on mutual needs, like having children with a spouse of equal social rank or needing a nother parent for their child when the spouse died, and there was the quick burning passion of a sexual relationship. The idea of two souls melding to become one, or finding your other half, wasn't popular until the twelfth century when the nobility of an area in France started what I would call a "romance with love". Why would I call it that? Because it took centuries for love as we know it to be a reason for marriage. The love that developed in France developed outside of marriage. Marriage was designed by the parents or the head of the family but the new version of love was more infatuation than anything healthy. Campbell said it was a meeting of the eyes across the room and an instant recognition of a great love. This love was often something pursued while ignoring their spouse (which was common in the time of arranged marriages in society). It is from this time that the term "savage" became popular. Women were expected to make their suitors prove their love by some deed (supposedly a popular test was to have a man guard a bridge for a certain amount of time)before giving the man permission to "love" them. By the action of love, the woman could mean many things. It could be as simple as giving him permission to sneak a kiss every once in a while or as complete as welcoming him into her bed. Either way, a woman who asked too much of a test was "savage" as was a woman who asked no test of a man's love before granting him the permission he asked for.<br />
<br> Why do I tell you about the history of love? I'm not sure. I'm reviewing what was in this chapter and there wasn't much for a fiction writer to learn in this chapter. It was a fascinating history lesson with a number of stories or facts I plan to look up. It may be useful to know how love, an emotion needed for happiness but not survival, became so common. I'm sure that it is useful to learn different types of love so you can get the accompanying emotional story right. A lady struggling between choosing a man she shares a passionate sexual relationship with and a man she's been best friends with all her life due to the early understanding that they would marry would react differently to each and may not notice that her "other half" is really the neighbor helping her through the tough decision. In that case her emotional story could depend on how well you understand the various depths of love and how she would express the different levels or emotions. I'm a big fan of never knowing too much about your characters or setting, but reality is that this chapter had little to offer fiction writers, in my opinion.<br />
<br> I did find a few interesting facts. Apparently there is an idea that hell is really getting what we think we want throughout eternity. If you devoted your life to building wealth on earth, you'll be wealthy in hell. If you sought fame all your life, you'll have it in hell. The writers Campbell quoted say that to the angels who are used to living with God, it seems like eternal punishment. I think it would have more to do with the saying "too much of a good thing is a bad thing" and never being able to get a rest from "your greatest desire". Can you imagine maintaining a business empire through eternity and never going on vacation or meeting someone to come home to at night? What about never getting a break from the cameramen and scrutiny of fame? You may be famous but what if there are no fences or security guards in hell? That doesn't sound so fun any more.<br />
<br> The last thing I want to mention from this chapter is the idea that love is pain. It seems that the original idea of true love was the willingness to ignore society to have who you loved. I guess that the jealousy and insecurity that comes with finding your other half could be considered "the pain of love". I just don't think that love in today's day and age, when divorce or breakups are common, compares to the pain of loving someone already married to someone else, someone like a friend or family member, when there was no emotion in marriage but the only way out was complete shame or death.<br />
<br> Sorry to have reviewed a chapter with so little to offer fiction writers, but it was an interesting read from a history and psychology standpoint. Still a recommended read, just not if you expect a lot of insight to improve your craft of writing fiction.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-67269041355930290482012-09-22T19:46:00.002-07:002012-09-22T19:51:13.272-07:00The Power Of Myth-The Goddess Was FirstChapter 6 of <a href="http://www.blogger.com/%3Ca%20href=%22http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0385418868/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=0385418868&linkCode=as2&tag=lilbswo-20%22%3EThe%20Power%20of%20Myth%3C/a%3E%3Cimg%20src=%22http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=lilbswo-20&l=as2&o=1&a=0385418868%22%20width=%221%22%20height=%221%22%20border=%220%22%20alt=%22%22%20style=%22border:none%20%21important;%20margin:0px%20%21important;%22%20/%3E" target="_blank">The Power of Myth by Joseph Campbell with Bill Moyers</a> was mostly about the Goddess. Campbell talked about how most religions first worshiped a goddess. From the Goddess came the earth and from the earth came the food the people ate. As the cultures moved from agriculture to hunting and fighting other cultures for territory or animals, women were no longer as important. The women did the "less necessary" tasks of raising the children and tending the plants in small gardens or hunting for plants in the nearby land while the strong men went hunting and gaining more wealth and prestige for the clan or town. In most myths, as agriculture became less important than hunting or wars, a male deity overpowered the Goddess and often the Goddess seems forgotten or at war with the male deity. From what I learned looking at the small Wikipedia article on Gaia, the Greek mother goddess and considered to be Earth itself, she was never conquered. When Cronos killed Uranus, she became less popular, rather like the weak grandmother than an all powerful goddess. It did mention that oaths sworn in the name of Gaia remained the strongest oath a person could take for a long time. However, Campbell seemed to think that Hera was the Goddess, not Gaia, at least in this context. According to Wikipedia, Hera does seem to have been worshiped before Zeus was popular in Greece and beyond. I also recall a number of current fictional items (such as television shows) that are set in that time or speak of that time that refer to Hera and Zeus, or at least their cults, being at war with each other. As in most cultures the Goddess (Hera) and the conquering male deity (Zeus) eventually made peace and were worshiped equally (although the male deity became the "king" and the female merely his queen). In many cultures though, the male deity killed the Goddess and her body became the earth we live on and depend upon. Oddly enough Christianity (including the Muslim and Jewish variations in this context) never had a Goddess figure. As it spread, the faith destroyed all who worshiped the Goddess on the hills and destroyed her temples. Although a short arguemment could be made of the Mother Mary being similar to the Goddess in how she was worshiped, Campbell made a point of saying that the one religion (that split into three and more over time) is the only religion he knows of that has no Goddess figure that created the male deity that would destroy or devalue the Goddess.<br />
Campbell also mentions that most ancient cities had their own deities that protected it. Although the city-states acknowledged and worshiped the other known deities around, it focused it's worship on one, maybe two deities. (The example that comes to mind is Athena and Athens.) He also talks about the older religions that thanked the animals themselves for giving their lives to be dinner and mentions that most religions have some sort of "rebirth". Most religions (Christianity included) strive to be dead to their animal nature or the desires of the flesh in order to be reborn to the desires of the spirit or universe. Commonly referred to as a "rebirth" or "enlightenment" the goal is common in most faiths.<br />
Why do I bring all of these ideas to your attention? You are here to learn to write better stories, create better characters, and take people to other places known only in your mind at the moment. Why do you want to know about ancient myths in order to write science fiction? First of all, your setting may be on an alien planet that still lives in ancient times or your ship may go down on a planet that still believes in ancient gods and goddesses ruling according to their whims. More than likely, you will never write about prehistory times but it is important to remember that the future is built on the past. It is the ancient myths and religions of a culture that create rituals and holidays of the present. Just think about Christmas: the Catholic Church at the time wanted to stop a bloody celebration where people couldn't be punished for anything that happened in that week. Instead they changed the reason for the celebration and over centuries turned the bloody celebration into a warm and fuzzy time for memories while merging other rituals and traditions with the old Roman holiday. (<a href="http://www.simpletoremember.com/vitals/Christmas_TheRealStory.htm" target="_blank">Here is an interesting article</a> I found on origins of Christmas and the accompanying traditions. Caroling anyone?)<br />
Events and rituals of the past or of today create the culture and society of the future and knowing the origins of a few of the customs your characters encounter, being able to tell the story of the history or significance of a cultural event or item can make your culture and story come alive for your readers.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-39095724048300963392012-08-03T03:48:00.000-07:002012-08-03T03:48:00.175-07:00Power Of Myth-It's All In The StoryJoseph Campbell and Bill Moyers make some interesting points in the fifth chapter of <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0385418868/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=0385418868&linkCode=as2&tag=lilbswo-20">The Power of Myth</a><img alt="" border="0" height="1" src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=lilbswo-20&l=as2&o=1&a=0385418868" style="border: medium none ! important; margin: 0px ! important;" width="1" />. The first one is that all the myths about a hero's journey, including the three major religions of the Western world, say that there can be no reward without sacrifice. The main reward that readers look for, although most readers don't realize it, is that the main character loses a great deal, enough to send him through some sort of journey, and learns that what he lost was so much more than what he (or she) gained in the end. The person accused of murder finds a true friend they never knew they had in their partner or someone finds their true love after a hard journey. Often a person learns to forgive themselves or to love themselves or how to let go of the past and move on to a happy future after a hard mental journey. Many readers don't realize that the real journey the main character is on in any good book that has stood the trials of time is a mental one leading to the climax, whether it's standing up to the villain or kissing their beloved or feeling welcome in their family or friends again after a long time away. In Moby Dick Captain Ahab couldn't let go of his past obsession and it killed him. In Emma she realized that love in a marriage was better than a wealthy husband and she let her friend marry the poorer man Emma had been avoiding the whole book. Even movies show this reality of stories when you look at Star Wars and the first Avengers movie. They had to move on from their insecurities and past experiences in order to conquer the evil threatening what they knew. They talk some about the two types of heroes: the one that purposely sets out on a "quest" like most of the heros in mythology and the one more common in real life, the one who doesn't chose to be a hero but it happens. Their example of the second type was the soldier that got drafted. He/she didn't chose to go to war but their number came up and they had no choice. They still become a hero but they didn't chose to set out on a quest. In fact, many characters don't realize they are on a quest, like the main character in the movie The Game who thinks he is on a safe Hollywood treasure hunt while really having switch places with a mob hunt, or they drag their feet the entire time, wondering "why me, why me?" and complaining until they decide to do something about their predicament. All those people are heroes in the end that go through and internal journey while moving through the plot, they just started out differently.<br />
Another thing Campbell comments on is that the villain in a story depends on the perspective of the reader. Some villains are evil because they want to be or because they were hurt and believe the hero deserves to be hurt. However, most real people who are seen as villains see themselves as heroes. Terrorists are furthering what is right and those who get hurt are standing in the way of "progress" or are hurting "the cause". From the point of view of most villains, they are morally correct and therefore not doing anything "wrong". It's how so many "evil" characters can continue doing hurting people for years. They're god is protecting them or they are creating a better future. Can you imagine watching the some of your favorite movies from the villain's point of view? In that story, the hero in the regular version is the antagonist in the villain's version. It is definitely something to keep in mind while you create your characters.<br />
Campbell also talked about the story of Icarus and Daedalus and the wax wings. He compares Icarus's urge to fly too high to the modern idea of getting really excited about a new adventure or idea. How many times have you had an awesome idea you really wanted to tell everyone about before you sat down to start it? I often tell people about my great idea, only to sit down and not have it turn out at all like I'd hoped and told everyone about. The choice then is to decide whether it's worth continuing on to strive for days, months, years on the idea or give it up. Often the initial enthusiasm means that details can be overlooked and science imperfect. He also mentions that science is proving what myths have told us about. How many times have you heard about a scientific discovery and assumed it's merely urban legend?<br />
Something else Campbell talks about which I have often realized. Our past has made each of us who we are. Often people can't accept their past, they hide parts of it or refuse to speak of things or even large parts of their lives because of shame or pain. However, our individual pasts, the friends we made and things we did, are at least as important to our development as the temperaments we are each born with. That is one reason why twins are never carbon copies of each other's personalities. One twin was closer to one friend than another, one twin had a teacher that the other twin didn't. A lot of stories deal with people finally dealing with their past shame or pain and once they do deal with it, once they accept what happened to them and that they are exactly what they should be, only then can they live full lives in the light instead of hiding partially in the shadows.<br />
Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-70419131457227824142012-07-27T03:40:00.001-07:002012-07-27T03:43:12.568-07:00Power Of Myth-The Evolution Of MythMy latest reading of <a href="http://www.blogger.com/%3Ca%20href=%22http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0385418868/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=0385418868&linkCode=as2&tag=lilbswo-20%22%3EThe%20Power%20of%20Myth%3C/a%3E%3Cimg%20src=%22http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=lilbswo-20&l=as2&o=1&a=0385418868%22%20width=%221%22%20height=%221%22%20border=%220%22%20alt=%22%22%20style=%22border:none%20%21important;%20margin:0px%20%21important;%22%20/%3E" target="_blank">The Power Of Myth</a> by Joseph Campbell with Bill Moyers had some fascinating ideas such as that following your bliss shows you that you are exactly where you want to be in live. He went on to say that everyone needs their "bliss station", that place where they are at peace with the universe and nothing can affect them. For me that is often as simple as putting on my headphones or, on really bad days, turning on my favorite television show. It's a place that makes everyone relax and forget about that bully at work or the pressures of too many deadlines or responsibilities. In ancient times, sacred spots were where people were allowed to find their bliss, to get a few minutes or hours away from the demands of this world and worship something they trusted. He goes on to explain that when people settled a new spot, they "sanctified" the spot through rituals such as having their house face depending on their beliefs of the sun or spirits, or having their settlements a specific distance apart.<br />
One of the interesting ideas Campbell and Moyers talk about is that geography helps shape a culture and religion. If you compare the nomadic cultures to the agricultural cultures, you can often see what they mean. They often mentioned that the Goddess religions were often found in agricultural societies, where women domesticated animals and harvested the crops while the men would go on long hunts. The women became very important in those days but the spread of Christianity, with the unusual idea of only one deity, a male, turned women into little more than a possession to power hungry men. They also speak of the idea that most early religions were very familiar with the idea that from death comes life. There was not the finality that death possesses in Christian cultures where death is the end of things on Earth, but an idea that one end really is a beginning for new life of something else. It's an idea that Christians have forgotten. Death is not the absolute end but merely a new beginning to a much longer life in Heaven or Hell.<br />
They continue to talk about how creation myths, such as the Native Americans and the Bible tell very similar stories but don't quite explain how two sons become whole nations when wives are not mentioned as being created.<br />
An interesting side note to think about when creating fictional societies comes from the Mayan version of basketball. I remember learning about the game in grade school so I know it is at least partly common knowledge. The teams would arrive at the huge court and play a hard game to get the balls through the vertical hoops while crowd watched and cheered. Then the victory celebration was that the winners were sacrificed to the gods. Unlike the Hollywood idea that the ancient sacrifices were forced to die or were resigned to their fates, these teams fought hard for the chance to die in honor of their gods. It definitely creates a different possibility for religion. What would a culture be like where the aim of people's lives was to be worthy of kill for their gods' pleasure, that to die of old age or sickness was a shame? It would certainly be different from the modern American idea to accumulate material goods and live as long as possible as comfortable as possible. <br />
It’s interesting thinking about all the parts and pieces that go into the psychology of a budding society, according to historians. Figuring out where your fictional society is in its evolution can do a lot in telling you the mythical history of your people.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-85650943236517239462012-02-17T21:55:00.000-08:002012-02-17T22:05:06.283-08:00The Power of Myth-Chapter 2Last post I said that I hadn’t figured out how <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0385418868/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=lilbswo-20&linkCode=as2&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=0385418868">The Power of Myth</a> by Joseph Campbell With Bill Moyers could be useful to fiction writers. In the second chapter I found at least one explanation as it deals with what a myth is and how it was created and adapted through time. Although I don’t agree with his philosophy that, as I understood it, claims that the universal ruler, if there is one, isn’t as important as the bit of that creator inside each of us that unites us, I do recognize his usefulness in creating mythology for our fictional species.<br /> Mythology is how people explained and related to the world around them before they had the time and technology to explain the world scientifically. Deities and mythical creatures helped the ancient people accept any natural disaster that occurred, entertained nomads then farmers around the nightly fires, and the worship rituals gave the people who had to spend all day everyday doing the same job, such as working the fields or caring for the family, that they may not have liked doing something to look forward to. The belief that the world was ruled and judged by unseen eyes provided order as people feared the wrath of a powerful being more than the punishment of a friend or a town. Ceremonies like asking the blessings of a god on planting or harvesting or a birth allowed people to leave the fields and gather together every few weeks or months and see family members and friends that may have moved away. <br />Mythology is an important part in the development of a culture and helps form the morals and laws of a culture or species. This book tells of what Campbell believes is a single truth that is retold throughout the world in different variations depending on the culture telling it. He believes the truth for Earth is to live in harmony with everyone and everything but the truth of your planet may be one creature that created the world from loneliness or a need for an army to defeat his enemies. I believe that to create a culture you need to decide what the focus is (is the creature a warrior’s culture like the Klingons, a merchant culture like the Ferengi, a culture aimed at watching other species without interfering, or any other type of culture) and decide how the planet created. Once you know those two things you can decide what myths entertained the early nomads or cave dwellers and how those myths progressed to create the current religion/culture.<br />Even if you have no intent of knowing the entire mythological evolution of the culture you are creating or that one of your characters comes from, you should still have an idea of what the “religion” or focus of society is whether it’s the reputation of a person or family like with the Klingons or money like the Feregis or understanding and peace like the Minbari spiritual caste or family or success or anything else you want your species to aim for and a few culturalLi'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-68161896079489640522012-02-03T20:26:00.000-08:002012-02-03T20:35:46.220-08:00Power Of Myth Review, Part 2I read the first chapter of "<a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0385418868/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=lilbswo-20&linkCode=as2&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=0385418868">The Power of Myth</a>" this last week and was impressed. Joseph Campbell’s thinking process is very different from the common thought on things that it really does make one think. It is fascinating from a psychology and philosophy perspective but I haven’t seen how it applies to story writing. For a science fiction of fantasy writer it is an interesting way to think about the creation of culture based on myth. That is nearly all I could get out of the first chapter for story writers but other ideas Campbell talks about are interesting to consider. <br /> One of his big discussions with Bill Moyers is on his idea that modern marriage doesn’t work because modern couples look more for physical pleasure than for the spiritual connection of two halves creating one whole and that a family is as much about the relationship between the parents as it is to raising the children. Couples that spend all their time and energy focused on the family as a whole and seeing their children succeed often find that once the children have left home for college or their own careers, the parents no longer have much in common or are comfortable with their spouse, leading to the modern trend of marriages that end after decades of “successful” marriage. Campbell believes that if couples take the time to keep interested in their spouses life outside the family and maintain the emotionally intimate relationship they had when married, there would be fewer divorces and more happy marriages.<br /> One of his quotes that I rather like and that does have to do with writing stories: “The only way you can describe a human being truly is by describing his imperfections…It is the imperfections of life that are lovable.” No one wants to read about a perfect person or society because perfection is boring and predictable. People want to read about someone learning to work with an imperfection instead of hiding it or working against the imperfection. It is our imperfections that make us individual and our imperfections that make life interesting. It’s a good thing to remember when making characters and a great thing to remember as you create your storyline and plot.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-42710148832024682262012-01-29T03:41:00.000-08:002012-01-29T03:54:30.071-08:00The Power Of Myth-Part 1I am sorry about this but I only made it through the introduction in the book "by Joseph Campbell with Bill Moyers" this week. I had planned to get through the second chapter but I didn't. I can say I'm looking forward to reading the book. Just reading the introduction told me it was my kind of book. It said that Campbell's works helped inspire the Star Wars stories and he became friends with George Lucas when Lucas "acknowledging a debt to Campbell's work, invited the scholar to view the Star Wars trilogy." Seeing how popular the series was (at that time it was just the first three movies) you can imagine how curious I am about what part this research played. I'm also fascinated by Campbell's idea that people don't really search for the meaning of life but that they really search for the "experience of life". This is definitely an interesting guy to learn from and I get a front row seat to the book, written in interview form. This promises to be a very interesting read and I could get a very different view of storytelling afterward, or at least a few ideas.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-87233111599333643292012-01-22T09:11:00.000-08:002012-01-22T09:11:00.730-08:00How To Publish Your NovelIn 5 Steps<br /><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/12/how-to-prepare-to-publish-your-novel.html">Be sure your novel is amazing</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/12/why-synopsis.html">Write a synopsis</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/12/is-literary-agent-right-for-you.html">Decide on a few agents, or not</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/12/why-you-should-take-query-letter.html">Write some query letters</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2012/01/what-to-do-now-that-your-query-is-out.html">Don't wait around forever</a><br /><br />Of course, you may not want to do all that so <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2012/01/self-publishing-e-book.html">here is an article</a> on how to self-publish an e-book with a link to self-publishing a paper book.<br /><br /><br />Due to pressure at work to get a huge certification done very soon, I will not have a lot of time to research my blog posts as I usually do. Last time I ran out of time like this, I shut down the blog for a month to get things done. I don't want to do that this time because when I get this certification done, I get to restart my fiction writing again. Thinking about that, I realized that I have a number of writing books I haven’t read yet. For the next month or two I will read through some of these books and tell you each week what I’ve learned and what I think of what I’ve read so far.<br /><br />The first book will be Joseph Campbell’s <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0385418868/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=lilbswo-20&linkCode=as2&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=0385418868">The Power of Myth</a>. Based on a few televised interviews, Campbell talks about how modern people live out the themes of myths everyday. He believes that all stories are similar to the myths and legends of old and has devoted his life to comparing the myths of cultures all over the Earth.<br /><br />While Joseph Campbell’s book may not exactly be aimed at writers and the second book on my reading list is. Christopher Vogler bases part of his idea in the book <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/193290736X/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=lilbswo-20&linkCode=as2&camp=1789&creative=390957&creativeASIN=193290736X">The Writers Journey: Mythic Structure for Writers</a> that every story ever told successfully, from ancient myths to current movies, has been written with the same basic outline and characters. I’ve heard rave reviews of the books and think that reading these books over the next two months will improve my fictional characters and hopefully my storyline and plots. <br /><br />I hope you join me as I review these books and learn new things as we go.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-34486866094705436502012-01-14T18:29:00.000-08:002012-01-14T18:44:13.159-08:00Self-Publishing An E-BookOf course, going the long way of writing the book, deciding on a few agents, and sending out query letters before repeating the process a few times may be too long for you. You want to see your amazing story in print now. For those who wish to avoid the hassle of finding an agent and publisher, you can publish your own book. In this day and age of electronics, self-publishing is accepted more and more and may be a good way to set up getting an agent. Someone who has already sold a lot of self-published books would already have proven there is an audience for him or her and would be an easier person to represent than an author with only a few articles published.<br />It also may be the easiest way to get published. Now a days traditional publishers are having more and more trouble selling hard copies but self-published ebooks still sell. I can’t pretend to be an expert on this ever-changing topic so <a href="http://reviews.cnet.com/how-to-self-publish-an-e-book">here</a> is an excellent article on the self-publishing world as far as e-books. It also has a link to his article on traditional self-publishing a paperback book. I do plan to look into self-publishing something soon so I’ll let you know what more I learn but for now, enjoy the article and keep writing.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-59253027633724065742012-01-07T21:49:00.000-08:002012-01-07T21:49:00.237-08:00What To Do Now That Your Query Is Out?Now that you’ve sent out your query letter to agents, what do you do? Don’t just sit around twiddling your thumbs while you watch for the mailman and watch your inbox. Go take that trip you’ve waited for, go work in your garden or kitchen. Clean the house or watch that week long marathon you’ve been dreaming of. Do whatever it is you’ve been putting off while you perfect your novel. It may even do you good to start a new book. Those characters that kept bothering you but didn’t fit in your current novel have their own story to tell. Let it out and get immersed in a new story. Whatever you do, don’t keep rereading and rereading the same story trying to perfect it. Live a little and learn something new. Get your mind out of the story and relax. After a month, or at least a week, you can go back to your story and look at it again with new eyes. You need a new perspective and a less stressed mood to see things as a reader and not the writer. Start the process over again if you want or wait until your first round of replies comes. Some replies will probably come within days, others may never be replied to while others may take months to get through their pile of suggestions.<br /><br /> <br /><br />Just relax and remember that any rejections you get are at your writing, not you personally. Writing is a craft you learn, a technique you perfect. Most authors have gone years before they got published but they kept at it because they loved to write and they knew that one day someone would treasure their story as much as they did. <a href="http://www.right-writing.com/rejection.html">Here</a> is a good article on other famous authors who got rejected and how they dealt with rejection.<br /><br /> <br /><br />As a side note, don’t expect every agent or editor you send your query letter to will give you a reason why they don’t want it. Some will give you a critique if they have the time but many agents and editors (speaking for freelancers) won’t be willing to open themselves up to arguments from authors who think their work is the best the world has ever seen. If you want examples, read <a href="http://www.right-writing.com/published-rejection.html">this article</a> from an editor’s perspective. Once you’ve gotten the rejection letters, and you will probably get a few your first time out at least, read them and decide what next. You can send the editor/agent a thank-you for their time, which may get you a few brownie points in the future but probably won’t matter, you can throw the story away and start fresh in a fit of despair, you can relax, breath deep, and just accept that you aren’t a perfect fit for the person at that time, or any number of other responses. Arguing with an agent or editor is a sure way to be ignored in the future, at least by that person, but sending a professional thank you to someone who sent a critique is a must. Get known for being nice and professional and you may start getting more critiques, or you may still be treated like everyone else. It’s up to you to decide how you react, their words are merely their opinions and not the global opinion. Keep that in mind and you may become a published author yet.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-74745316366364817162012-01-01T22:37:00.000-08:002012-01-01T22:48:07.735-08:00Best of 2011 Writer's JourneyThe new year has come and the old year has gone. Before we say adieu to 2011, let's have a look at the things I talked about this year.<br /><br />2011 I focused a lot of creating <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/06/what-to-remember-when-creating-your.html">the right setting for your story</a>.<br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/03/how-to-create-space-ship.html">Creating a Space Ship</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/06/15-things-to-think-about-when-you.html">Creating a Space Station</a><br />What to think about when <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/06/settings-in-real-world.html">setting your story in the real world</a> and the <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/06/setting-your-story-partially-in-real.html">partially real or alternate Earth</a><br /><br />Next I wrote some <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/11/writing-techniques.html">writing techniques</a> to help you actually write your story.<br /><br />Now you have <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/all-you-need-to-write-your-story.html">everything you need to write your story</a>. Sit down and write it so you can make 2012 the year you write your best work so far.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-70912424866406585122011-12-24T20:28:00.000-08:002011-12-24T20:28:01.076-08:00Why You Should Take A Query Letter SeriouslyOnce you’ve <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/12/is-literary-agent-right-for-you.html">found some agents or publishing houses</a> that you think would be interested in your novel, you can use your <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/12/why-synopsis.html">synopsis</a> to write an engaging query letter. I’d recommend writing one great query letter you save as the template but read about each agent’s specifications and adjusting to each agent before sending out the letters. <a href="http://www.agentquery.com/writer_hq.aspx">This article</a> gives a good template and awesome examples on how to write the standard query letter and why it’s foolish to “try something new” when writing query letters. <a href="http://blog.nathanbransford.com/2010/08/how-to-write-query-letter.html">This next blog post</a> is by Nathan Bransford, a man who was a literary agent for a number of years as well as having had a child’s book published so he knows the business. He also gives a lot of resources on agents and practical ideas for taking a lot of stress out of the process. <a href="http://blog.nathanbransford.com/2007/06/your-rights-as-author.html">Here</a> is a great blog post by Nathan on what to know about your rights as an author before sign anything. (Sorry, this doesn’t quite go here, but it is something you should know if an agent gets back to you about your novel.) <a href="http://queryshark.blogspot.com/">Query Shark</a> is an interesting blog where you can send in a query letter to be critiqued in public or can read other letters be honestly critiqued by an actual agent.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-58791219600217353632011-12-17T13:24:00.000-08:002011-12-17T13:24:00.179-08:00Is a Literary Agent Right for You?Now that you’ve <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/12/why-synopsis.html">written your synopsis</a>, you need to decide if you want an agent or not. There are a number of pros and cons for choosing an agent or not. The agent is a good thing because knowing the publishing business and who would likely buy what is their business, it’s how they get paid so they are usually good at it. There are also a number of large publishing houses that will no longer take submissions by authors that aren’t represented by literary agents. However, there are a number of dishonest agents who will sign you to a deal that will be much more beneficial to them than the author or that agree to represent a book for a fee but never plan to send that book to publishers. There are a lot of horror stories about agents but literary agents are often very good helps and can open a lot of doors unrepresented authors can’t touch.<br /><br />Once you’ve decided you want an agent, you need to research which agents will most likely enjoy your book (genre, previous books…) Each agent wants specific things and possibly different formats. If you’ve decided that you don’t want an agent, you have to do the same research on publishing companies.<br /><br />As an unpublished author, I can’t give you proven advice on how to pick an agent but I found a number of sites that can give proven advice and help finding good literary agents for science fiction writers.<br /><br />As an ex-agent, <a href="http://blog.nathanbransford.com/">Nathan Bransford</a> has an interesting perspective on the publishing community and what literary agents are looking for in a query letter and a book.<br /><br />Chuck Sambuchino’s <a href="http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/guide-to-literary-agents">blog</a> is a guide to literary agents and their blogs or articles with a focus on new agents with less on their plates who are more open to new writers than some of the ones in the business that already have a lot of clients to keep up with.<br /><br />SFWA is the Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America website and an excellent resource for and science fiction or fantasy writer. <a href="http://www.sfwa.org/for-authors/writer-beware/agents/">This </a>is an article on the pros and cons of literary agents as well as how to choose a good one that will actually do the work needed to make your novel a success.<br /><br />WEBook is a writing community and <a href="http://blog.webook.com/webook_blog/2010/10/literary-agents-representing-science-fiction-and-fantasy.html">this article</a> is a list of a few agents looking for science fiction and fantasy writers.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-35468723574859215882011-12-11T00:30:00.000-08:002011-12-11T00:30:01.821-08:00Why a Synopsis?Once your story is perfect, or at least awesome, you need to write a synopsis of your book. More than a summary, your synopsis is the entire story in a few pages. (I originally read that a page in the synopsis for every twenty-five pages in your book. Although that is a good way to narrow down the plot points, the two articles I like about writing a synopsis recommend fewer pages so the reader doesn’t get bored. Remember that publishers, editors, and agents read hundreds of letters and synopsis a month and yours needs to be just right to get a second look.) It needs to grab the readers attention and enthrall them in just a few pages. That’s tough and here are two articles (<a href="http://www.how-to-write-a-book-now.com/how-to-write-a-synopsis.html">here</a> and <a href="http://www.fictionfactor.com/articles/synopsis.html">here</a>) to help you figure out how to make your synopsis exactly what publishers are looking for.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-46561427039869873772011-12-04T03:21:00.000-08:002011-12-04T03:21:00.196-08:00How To Prepare To Publish Your NovelYou’ve <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/11/writing-techniques.html">written your novel</a> and you think it’s ready for the publisher. Now what?<br /><br />You could just print off a lot of copies, put the full novel in envelopes, and send them to publishing houses, hoping the publishers will love the novel as much as you do. However, if you do it that way, every single one of your copies will be thrown in the trash unopened. As with any business, there is the proper way to do things and the sloppy way to do things. Sending the full novel straight to publishers is the sloppy way The proper way to do things is in small bits. First you make sure your story is perfect, which includes letting others read and critique it. (One great site for hopeful authors to be read by other writers who know about technique and style, and tone that publishers will look for is <a href="http://www.writing.com/">Writing.com</a>.) <br /><br />One thing to remember before you start sending out letters is that publishers and agents often ask for a few sample chapters before they agree to publish your novel or represent you. With that in mind, be sure that your first three chapters are great, even if you continue to tweak the later chapters.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-14143077282004306672011-11-13T06:09:00.000-08:002011-11-13T06:09:00.347-08:00Writing TechniquesAs much fun as it is to sit down and write your story, to just let the words flow and watch your story come to life before your eyes, you need to remember that isn’t all it takes to get a story published. You need to remember to craft your writing and think about using the best wording every time you write. At the beginning it’s okay to write and then focus on technique and craft in the revisions. Soon you’ll be so used to thinking about craft and technique that you’ll be wording things naturally while you write your first draft. That will make it much simpler when it comes time for the revisions.<br /><br />Although there are a lot of techniques involved in writing well, here are a few we covered.<br /><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/07/point-of-view.html">Point of View</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/07/finding-your-writers-voice.html">Writer's Voice</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/07/finding-your-writers-voice.html">Use Your Vocabulary</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/07/got-big-project-planned.html">Cut Your Project into Manageable Parts</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/07/avoid-pointless-rambling.html">Avoid Rambling</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/why-should-sci-fi-writers-know-details.html">Know the Details</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/how-do-you-create-setting.html">How to Create a Setting</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/character-profile.html">How to Create a Character</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/how-to-make-realistic-characters.html">A Tip for Making Realistic Characters</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/more-on-characters.html">A Final Thought on Characters</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/work-from-plan.html">Plan Your Writing</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/all-you-need-to-write-your-story.html">Stop Thinking and Write Your Story!</a><br /><br />Time to Revise Your story<br /><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/foreshadowing.html">Foreshadowing</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/is-it-story-or-report.html">Are You Writing a Report or a Story?</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/whats-so-troublesome-about-cliches.html">Avoid Cliches</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/watch-how-you-tell-things.html">Think About How You Tell Your Story</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/pacing-reviews.html">Pacing</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/10/writers-enemy.html">Watch the Grammar</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/10/cinematic-views-in-writing.html">Imagine the Movie</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/10/watch-technical-speaking-in-dialogue.html">Be Careful with Technical Terms</a><br /><a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/10/time-to-cut-pointless.html">Watch the Details</a>Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-31350113536928329042011-10-14T14:07:00.000-07:002011-10-14T14:19:12.289-07:00Time To Watch The DetailsYou’ve gone through <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/all-you-need-to-write-your-story.html">your story</a> and edited it some and <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/10/time-to-revise-your-story.html">taken out the scenes </a>you decided were no longer needed. Now you need to sit down and go through your story with a highlighter. Read the story slowly, preferably out loud if you aren’t disturbing anyone, and don’t just read what you think you wrote. Read only what you actually wrote and make sure all your character and story points are still valid. Often my view of my character, especially details and background, changes throughout the book. Maybe I thought she had a cousin early in the book only to decide later in the writing process that her parent was an only child. Readers will notice those things and editors are paid to notice those differing details. If you wrote a story over a few months or years, you may have very different backgrounds to your characters that will confuse editors and lose you a deal on what could otherwise be a very well written story with excellent characters, at least at the end of the book. Details can make or break a story and reading through your story in a short period of time such as a week or weekend will allow you to keep all those details in your head and allow you to notice differences.<br />As you’re reading your story look for <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/whats-so-troublesome-about-cliches.html">clichés</a> or <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/watch-how-you-tell-things.html">dialogues that go on too long</a>. Early in the writing process it is easy to write a cliché or explain everything at once so things are on paper quickly. During the following revisions is when you need to notice those things and rewrite or remove such things.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-43215546904928851882011-10-10T05:57:00.000-07:002011-10-10T05:57:00.340-07:00Time To Revise Your StoryNow that you’ve <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/09/all-you-need-to-write-your-story.html">written your first draft</a> and edited it some, let’s talk about revising your story for the second or third draft.<br />This is where you go through your story and make sure everything is needed and in the right place. Now that you know where your characters will end up at the end of your story, you can go back and debate with yourself if that scene in the kitchen really needs to be set in the kitchen, or would it be better after the next two scenes and set on the porch. Now you can go back and remove scenes that don’t support the story or plot and figure out where you need to add more scenes to foreshadow or hint at how the story will end. Did you put scenes in the beginning of the book that no longer make sense with the ending you wound up writing instead of the one you thought you’d write? Now is the time to take those scenes out. Start first with the scenes needed, then we can edit the information in the scenes you decide to keep.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-12388362567099141922011-10-08T06:01:00.000-07:002011-10-08T06:01:00.371-07:00Watch The Technical Speaking In DialogueHow often have you watched those technical shows so popular on television these days? I’m talking about medical shows like House M.D and Gray’s Anatomy or crime shows like the CSIs and Law and Order series. As you watch those types of shows, you’ll hear them say a lot of technical things, such as scientific things, but eventually they will convert the conversation to simple terms for the laymen who didn’t get degrees in what the characters did. As you write your stories, you need to be careful about how much technical garble you put in them. You should have done a lot of research to write your story accurately and you may have learned a lot of the technical phases the professionals use. Although you may understand what your characters are saying to each other, your reader may not and they may get lost in the garble. If they get too distracted from the flow of the story and upset about not understanding the conversation, they will but the story down and find another story they can understand without a textbook next to them.<br />A good rule of thumb in creating dialogue for your characters is to keep it simple while still being true to the character. The balance needed for that is a delicate one and it may help to have a beta reader who has no problem telling you when you confuse them with too much phraseology and need to rewrite a scene to clarify things.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-30817027050723145702011-10-06T06:28:00.000-07:002011-10-06T06:28:00.586-07:00Cinematic Views In WritingSomething I read recently was advice to “write from different cinematic views”. I was looking for some similar articles online but all I found was references to a looked-down-upon way of writing fiction that focused on external and internal dialogue rather than description.<br /><br /> <br /><br />Not quite what I was looking for, so I went back to the website I found the tidbit on and the description was “<a href=" http://www.poynter.org/how-tos/newsgathering-storytelling/writing-tools/76067/fifty-writing-tools-quick-list/">Turn your notebook into a camera.</a>” I like that idea because how often when you write do you see a scene in your head as you go? I often think like that as I write a conversation between characters or have a character walking down a path somewhere. I never thought about moving the camera in my head around the room though.<br /><br /> <br /><br />Let’s say you’re writing a scene about a husband and wife making dinner together and talking about the upcoming visitors for supper or the weekend. You wrote the scene looking at them in your head from the front. How different would the scene look on to your writer if you moved the camera to the left side of the room? Would the reflection of the couple in the window above the sink change the image much, or at least the effect given the reader? Would the effect change if the reader were looking in the window or through the door to the dinning room? Would the story be better by having the conversation take place or summarized by the couple’s kids waiting in the living room? These are all good things to think about when you edit your current work of fiction and viewing possible changes in your head as if it were a movie is a good way to decide if the changes really do improve your story.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-87636159772996541612011-10-02T06:38:00.000-07:002011-10-02T06:38:00.480-07:00A Writer's EnemyAs a writer, I believe the hardest thing about writing well is doing so inside the rules of grammar. Here are some online resources to help you learn the rules of grammar and punctuation. <br /><br /><a href="http://www.grammarbook.com/">Grammarbook.com</a><br /><br /><a href="http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/">A Guide to Grammar and Writing</a><br /><br /><a href="http://web.cn.edu/kwheeler/resource_gram.html">A page full of grammar downloads and PDFs</a><br /><br /><a href="http://www.bartleby.com/141/">A great grammar book now online: The Elements of Style</a><br /><br />Once you know the rules, it is much easier to write well and know how to ignore the rules to get the effect you want on your readers.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-389237430416121742011-09-30T06:37:00.000-07:002011-09-30T06:37:00.094-07:00Pacing ReviewsSomething I’ve recently learned about when looking into the craft and techniques good writers use is that you can control the pace and mood of the reader as they go through your story by alternating lengths of sentences and paragraphs. As I just discovered the new technique, I don’t think it smart for me to try and explain it to you in a helpful way. However, I believe this to be an important technique to learn so I am going to give you links to other people who do understand this technique and can explain it to you better than I can.<br /><br />K. M. Weiland’s <a href="http://wordplay-kmweiland.blogspot.com/2010/05/how-scene-and-chapter-length-control.html">video blog</a> on pacing based off of chapters definitely gives me something to think about when revising my stories. For those of you who prefer reading to listening, the UTube video is also transcribed below the video box. <br /><br />She wrote an excellent blog post about <a href="http://wordplay-kmweiland.blogspot.com/2009/07/5-ways-to-pace-your-story.html">5 ways to pace a story</a> that I recommend every writer trying to capture the attention of others read. Those are some great ways to vary pacing and thoughts to remember as you edit.<br /><br />Aimed more at those who want to create <a href="http://bloodredpencil.blogspot.com/2011/04/pacing-in-writing.html">suspense</a>, Heidi M. Thomas does a great job of explaining how to speed up a book. However, she gets into the basics of pacing and those of you that want to slow your story down can merely reverse her ideasLi'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-3420440191621756952011-09-28T06:31:00.000-07:002011-09-28T06:31:00.623-07:00Watch How You Tell ThingsOne of the hardest things to do as a writer is to balance the action with description. When I write a story, I tend to write down all the description at once. I remember reading the Babysitter’s Club books years ago and getting annoyed after the first few books because the writer always did the same thing. Whenever the Club had their first meeting in the book, the writer always spent a whole chapter describing every person at the meeting. The idea was that if the reader hadn’t read ever book in the series until that book, it wasn’t hard to meet the characters. To those that had read most or every book in the series, it was plain annoying. I quickly got in the habit of reading the first page or so of conversation and flipping through the chapter to the rest of the conversation, effectively skipping all the family and personal data of the characters I already knew. Now that I’m reading books for older people, I’m noticing a much more effective way of describing people and their backgrounds, which is in little pieces. It’s expected that when a character is introduced the writer will give a description and maybe an biographical paragraph if the point of view character knows the information. Saying the guy is tall, brown haired, and has a gorgeous smile but the character knows he’s hiding a black heart behind that smile as she used to date him often works better than having all their past history fly through her mind at the sight of him on the way to her important meeting. Although seeing him again may serve to distract her at the meeting, a long description of the past may slow down the pace for the reader.<br /><br />Depending on the effect you want to create, a better way to introduce character may be more subtle like giving a brief physical description and the point of view character doesn’t realize for a few pages that his sister’s friend has lovely green eyes up close rather than the plain brown eyes he assumed because of her hair color or the friend’s dimples don’t make it into the book until he actually smiles.<br /><br />As you write your story, I want you to keep in mind the different effects you can use in description and introduction of characters and settings. Think about how you want your readers to view this new place or person and what mood you have going in your story or scene. Once you know those things, you can decide how you want to craft the description to create the desired affect.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-65527137418116816832011-09-26T06:06:00.000-07:002011-09-26T06:06:00.241-07:00What's So Troublesome About Cliches?As you go through and revise your rough draft or your tenth draft or any other draft you do, remember to watch out for clichés. <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clich%C3%A9">Wikipedia</a> describes clichés as: “an expression, idea, or element of an artistic work which has been overused to the point of losing its original meaning or effect, rendering it a stereotype, especially when at some earlier time it was considered meaningful or novel… A cliché is often a vivid depiction of an abstraction that relies upon analogy or exaggeration for effect, often drawn from everyday experience. Used sparingly, they may succeed. However, cliché in writing or speech is generally considered a mark of inexperience or unoriginality.” Although readers may skim over clichés in their reading, an editor or other writers will notice. Being labeled unoriginal in the writing community is laughable and until you can learn to minimize the use of clichés, or better yet: avoid them, you won’t be taken seriously as a writer and aren’t likely to get anything published.<br /><a href="http://writeitsideways.com/how-cliched-is-your-writing-take-the-test/">Here</a> is a very thorough article on clichés to involve clichés in expressions, plots, characters, and a self test on clichés. Another place to look for information on clichés is a list of clichés in alphabetical order on the <a href="http://www.clichesite.com/alpha_list.asp?which=lett+1">ClicheSite.com</a>.Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6086112110265548303.post-50306109234211583572011-09-24T06:30:00.000-07:002011-09-24T06:30:00.390-07:00Is It A Story Or A Report?When you pick up a newspaper or read a news article online, you may get a lot of details and facts, but you don’t feel as if you were standing right there. News reports are designed to give a lot of information in a small amount of space; they don’t have a number of pages to write about how the scene affects all <a href="http://lilbsdailymusings.blogspot.com/2011/06/writing-for-five-senses.html">five senses</a> or to describe the setting in thrilling detail. They can’t make the scene come alive as story writers need to be able to. People read newspapers in order to get facts about current events. People read stories hoping to be somewhere else, someone else for a little while. They don’t merely want the facts of what happened and how, readers want to feel it and sense the action or tension in the room.<br /><br />The difference is in the details: how they’re incorporated in the scene and how they’re worded. Wording and timing are a writer’s best tools. Use them correctly and you may have an award-winning story. Don’t use them enough or correctly and you may not even have a good report to let others read. Which would you prefer to have at the end of your project?Li'l Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13401040182288118319noreply@blogger.com0